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Universidad Técnica de Ambato


                                                Carrera de Idiomas

                                                       Writing II


                  Jocelin Sánchez


                  4th “A”

                  Write a three level paragraph about a kind of a role model

                  chosen by a social group or culture (150 words) (Correction)


                  Follow the steps

                      1. Brainstorming

                      2. Draft a topic sentence

                      3. Make an outline (cluster or lineal)
                      4. First draft (Identifies topic sentence/General

                         statement/Concluding sentence)
                      5. Final draft (Identified improved topic sentence/Add

                         transitions, conjunctions/Improved general

                         statements/Details/Improved concluding sentence)

                  Brainstorming


                  Mahatma Gandhi


                        Followed by peaceful people

                        Peaceful ideals and interest
                        Solve problems without violence

                        Want India be a better society


                  Topic sentence

                    Mahatma Gandhi was an important role model in India for his

                  peaceful ideals, how he solves problems without violence and he

                  desire to want India be a better society.
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