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Mahatma Gandhi was an important role model around the
world for his peaceful ideals, his intelligence to solve problems
without violence, and his desire of freedom for India to be a
better society. First he had peaceful ideals and interest. [For this
reason, he never used violence. Even, when there were a lot of
people against him, he never kill someone.] Second, he was very
intelligent. [He made peaceful protest to achieve his goals. Also,
he always used good arguments against the guns.] Finally, he
wanted a better India for everybody. [For this reason, he made a
huge protest because of India to become an independent and
better society. Unfortunately, he was murdered in that protest.
Mahatma Gandhi shows to the world that we didn’t need to use
violence for get what we want. He was an important role model
for his example of peacefulness, intelligence, and desire of
freedom.
