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Ts: Mahatma Gandhi was an important role around the world for

his peaceful ideals, the way he solves problems without violence,
and he desire to want India to be an independent and better

society.

1. Peacefulness

a. Never use violence

b. Never kill
2. Intelligence

a. Do peaceful protest

b. Use arguments against guns
3. Desire of freedom

a. He want India became a better place

b. He was killed in that protest

Cs: Mahatma Gandhi show to the world that we don’t need to

use violence for get what we want. He was an important role
model for his example of peacefulness, intelligence, and desire of

First Draft

Mahatma Gandhi was an important role model around the
world for his peaceful ideals, his intelligence to solve problems

without violence and his desire of India to become an

independent and better society. First, he has peaceful ideals and
intelligence. He never used violence. He never killed someone.

Second, he was very intelligent. He do peaceful protest. He used

good arguments against guns. Finally, he want a better India for
everybody. He wanted India become an independent and better

society. He was murdered in that protest. Mahatma Gandhi
shows to the world that we don’t need to use violence for get

what we want. He was an important role model for his example

of peacefulness, intelligence, and desire of freedom.