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of America. Third, when he was already president, he did a lot of good things for people. During those
years there was slavery. Abraham was against it, and he was the president who abolished it. He also

fought for the rights of people. In conclusion, Abraham Lincoln was one of the greatest presidents of

the United States of America because he never gave up and kept trying and for the important things
that he did for Americans and that is why he is a role model for American people.

5. Final draft

Abraham Lincoln is considered a role model for Americans for the following reasons. First, since

Abraham Lincoln was only a child, he had a difficult childhood. His parents did not have enough
money, they were poor. He realized his situation and studied hard every day in school. Second, when

he finished his studies, he became a lawyer. He realized the reality of his country and he wanted to be
president. Unfortunately, he did not win the elections but that did not stop him to keep trying. He tried

over and over again until the fifth time he tried, he won and became the president of the United States
of America. Third, when he was already president, he did a lot of good things for people. During those

years there was slavery. Abraham was against it, and he was the president who abolished it. He also

fought for the rights of people. In conclusion, Abraham Lincoln was one of the greatest presidents of
the United States of America because he never gave up and kept trying and for the important things

that he did for Americans and that is why he is a role model for American people.

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