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CORRECTION- Task 2

Name: Gissela Sarsoza
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Date: May 5 , 2017 4 Semester
1. Choose a topic:

My role model is my brother for three reasons.

2. Brainstorming:

3. General Statement:

My brother Christian is my role model because he sets an example of support, level-

headedness and compassion.

 He is supportive.
 He is level-headed.

 He is compassionate.

4. Supporting points:

1. He is supportive
 He helps my parents with the household expenses.

 He always asks my mother “What do you want me to bring? “And he

buys what we need.
 He gives us advises or reassurance when my parents, my sister or me are

sad.

2. He is level-headed:
 He can solve problems and fix our electronic devices easily.

 He graduated as an engineer and he was among the best students of his

career.

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