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 He helps students of a master to do their projects.

3. He is compassionate:
 He loves to help others especially people in need.

 He went to help people in Atacames to rebuild their houses for a week.

 He said, “It was one of my best experiences in life.”
4. Add linkers:

 First of all

 Furthermore
 Lastly

5. Use subordinating conjunctions:

 He helps my parents with the household expenses. He always asks my mother
“What do you want me to bring? “So that he can buy what we need. If my

parents, my sister or me are sad, he gives us advises or reassurance.

 He can solve problems and fix our electronic devices easily. He is an engineer
and he was among the best students of his career. After his graduation he started

to work in the university because of his good grades. Now that he is not
working there anymore, he does some projects for master's students.

 He loves to help others especially people in need. By the time of the earthquake
in Atacames, he went to help people to rebuild their houses for a week. He said,

“It was one of my best experiences in life.”

6. First draft:

Christian Sarsoza, my older brother, is my role model because he sets an example of

support, level-headedness and compassion. First of all, he is supportive. He helps my
parents with the household expenses and always asks my mother “What do you want

me to bring? “So that he can buy what we need. If my parents, my sister or me are sad,

he gives us advises or reassurance. Furthermore, he is level-headed. He can solve
problems and fix our electronic devices easily. He is an engineer and he was among the

best students of his career. After his graduation he started to work in the university
because of his good grades. Now that he is not working there anymore, he does some

projects for master's students. Lastly, he is compassionate. He loves to help others

especially people in need. By the time of the earthquake in Atacames, he went to help
people to rebuild their houses for a week. He said, “It was one of my best experiences in

life.”

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