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Name: Jénnifer Mena
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Date: April 21 , 2017
Task 2
1. Choose a topic
My uncle is my role model because he was trustworthy, dynamic and focused.
A role model is the type of person who is rich.
A kind of role model is my classmate.
The best role model is Madre Teresa de Calcuta.
2. Brainstorming
Trustworthy
person
My
Uncle
Paúl
Mena
He
focused He was
in his dynamic
things.
3. General statements
My uncle was a trustworthy person with everyone, especially with me.
Dynamism was another of my uncle’s qualities
All the people knew my uncle was a focused man.
4. Supporting points, examples
I remember when I had a problem, he used to say “what happened? Tell me”.
We started to talk the things that happened and he gave me some advices to find
the solution.
He never told other people the things that I used to talk with him.
