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CORRECTION

Point by point outline

1. Women are more independent.
a) In my mother’s generations, women depended on a man especially after marriage.

In this case, they depended on her husband because men brought home money.
b) In my generation, women are independent because they make their own decisions

about anything that they want. Also, they like to do things by themselves and
carving a future without the help of their parents, boyfriend or husband.

2. Women are more determined.

a) In the generation of my mother, women had afraid to express themselves and say
what they thought. For example, when she was married, their husband made the

decisions for they and he did not ask his wife nor respected the ideas of her.
b) In my generation, women are more determined because most women know what

they want, they are not afraid to ask what they want and they work hard to make
their dreams come true.

3. Women can achieve what they want.

a) They have a vital role in society due to the introduction of women into the
working world.

b) In my mother’ generation, women occupied low-level jobs such as domestic

workers, secretaries, waitresses, etc.