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Step1. – Make a list about migration.
 Racism
 Unemployment
 Economy
 Kind of jobs
 Children’ studies
 Insurance policies

Draft Thesis Statement
There are several reasons why Ecuadorians used to travel abroad in order to get a better life
Step 2. - Number the items
 Racism (3)
 Unemployment
 Economy (2)
 Kind of jobs
 Children’ studies
 Insurance policies
 lack of jobs in their native countries (1)

Step 3.- Make a cluster

Social
discrimination
Economy

Jobs • Ecuadorian •Even in
s aren't Ecuador exist
• Ecuadorians want well paid discrimination.
well-paid jobs. as in •Foreign
• Latinamerican overdevelo countries are

countries can't ped not used to
offer higher countries deal with
salaries • Want to different ethnic
tounprofessional improve groups
people. their

lifesyle.

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