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A Moment I Wish I Could Relive

A day before entering the new era international school, my family for first place with two other

people(my fathers close friends). So as you can see we weren’t feeling too good about me. Even

though we didn’t know at the time I will enter this school, we were all hoping that test wasn’t

going to be as hard as my teacher that trained me was telling us it was going to be. I guess at
the time I wouldn’t have said I was scared and nervous, but now I can admit that I was scared

enough to pee the shorts I was wearing. These moments though are something that I yearn for

everyday, and just to go back and relive them would be something of a dream come true to me.

I believe that everyone as a moment in their life that they love and wish they could relive.

I surely wouldn’t like to experience the close call of peeing my shorts, but the moments being

on room with family before big test is the moments I would relive. As I sat by my sister I told
her that I felt like I was going to die because I was so nervous. She laughed and said, “Then

who was going to give test if you’re on the ground dead?” Although nervous, the laughter we

shared meant I certainly didn’t feel alone. Our joking around and teasing each other about
things we did in the past always brought us closer together. Our nerves seemed to vanish when

we were together cracking jokes and making fools of ourselves. But in the moment when I

giving test I was still nervous even after giving test. Result were insane. Yes I did it!! I finally

entered this school after all of that hard training .

I could end this story by giving you a how I took 32nd place out of around more than 700

students. Every little joke and humiliating thing we did together leading up to the winning are

the moments I would love to relive. Also the moments of tears and laughter are irreplaceable in
my mind. I believe these types of moments from our past inspire us to create future moments of

inspiration. So if I could go back and bottle the time I spent with my teacher and my old

classmates, especially the moment after I took 32nd place at state as my family stood together
with our arms around each other for a picture, this I believe could inspire great things in all of

us.
Student here

8B Khishigdorj Ts.