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Step 3: Decide the opinion you want to present in your essay.

I think that university education should be tuition free.

Step 4: Outline.

Thesis Statement: University education should be free for several reasons.

Topic Sentence 1: There are a lot of people who don’t have money to pay a tuition.

• Tuitions are usually exaggerated.

• There are extra expenses as transportation, food, and attachments.

• Books are expensive.

Topic Sentence 2: The government should help universities with money in order to students don’t
have to pay.

• Government can help universities by taxes that everyone pays.
• Education is something necessary in order to the country grows up.

• Most of the time, the money of tuition is used for other things that don’t have relation with the

university.

Step 5: Final Draft:

Should university education be tuition free?

Tuition is an amount of money that students must pay every semester to attend to classes at

university. It is a fact that universities need a lot of money to improve their services, but there are
many people that don’t have money to pay the tuition. I think that university education should be

tuition free in order to everyone can study. It could be possible with government’s help.

It is known that universities need money to satisfy their necessities such as improve
infrastructure, hire personnel, and buy furniture; but also, there are a lot of people who don’t have

money to pay the tuition. [Each semester, students must pay an exaggerate amount of money] besides
that [there are extra expenses as transportation, food, and photocopies.] Moreover, [the books that are

required are also expensive.] [All of these reasons mate it impossible that poor people can study at

university.]