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In fact, the government cannot help all the universities because it has priorities and there isn’t
enough money for everyone, but the government must have a budget only for education in order to
help universities. [Taxes can help universities and reduce the amount of tuitions.] Something
important is that [education is necessary for the country to grow up, so the government should invest
on universities.] Furthermore, [most of the time tuition’s money is used for other things that don’t
have relation with the university, so it should be banned.]
In conclusion, university education should be tuition free for the welfare of the country and its
development. The government must have more interest in help people and try to ban tuitions helping
universities in order to everyone can study and contribute with the development of the country.
Introduction strategy: Definition
Type of conclusion: Recommendation
Number of words: 262