Page 2 - ArgumentativeGraphicOrganizer-WRITING II
P. 2

In “Shame,” the speaker felt in love with   He describes Helene like the best girl   He  expresses  how  he  feels  when  he
     a little girl of his classroom. He describes   that  exists  in  the  world  because  he   talks to Helene. Also, he mentions the
     Helene’s physical appearance. Also, he   describes the things that the most he   way he treats the beautiful girl.
     mentions that he goes to school because   likes  and  the  reason  of  why  he  is  in
     he wants to see her every single day.    love with Helene.














            Reason  2
                             The child didn’t have a father, and he didn’t have money. However, the child learned that money
                             doesn’t mean happiness.


              Supporting Evidence                  Supporting Evidence                   Supporting Evidence
     I brushed my hair and even got me a  “I washed my socks and shirt every       No Supporting Evidence 3
     little old handkerchief. It was a lady's   night. I'd get a pot, and go over to

     handkerchief,  but  I  didn't  want   Mister  Ben's  grocery  store,  and
     Helene to see me wipe my nose on my
                                         stick  my  pot  down  into  his  soda
     hand.
                                         machine  and  scoop  out  some


     (Gregory)                           chopped  ice.  By  evening  the  ice
                                         melted to water for washing. I got
                                         sick  a  lot  that  winter  because  the

                                         fire would go out at night before the
                                         clothes were dry. In the morning I'd

                                         put  them  on,  wet  or  dry,  because
                                         they were the only clothes I had.”



                                         (Gregory)



                  Commentary                          Commentary                           Commentary
   1   2   3   4   5   6   7