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The kid wants to look good for He didn’t have money and he
Helene, he prefers to have a didn’t have different clothes to
lady's handkerchief rather than wear every day. But, he tries to
wipe his nose on his hand. He have his clothes clean because it is
thought that it would be too a value that he learned, and it is
unpleasant for the girl and for important. People should follow
him. this example because it is not
necessary to have the fashion
clothes to look good, but people
need clean clothes. Also, the boy
wants to impress Helene with his
look.
needed love from his father.
Reason 3 Teachers thought that the child couldn’t do anything well. Moreover, the child
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“The teacher thought I was stupid. She turned around and looked “There was shame there. Now there
mad. "We are collecting this
Couldn't spell, couldn't read, couldn't was shame everywhere. It seemed
money for you and your kind,
do arithmetic. Just stupid. Teachers Richard Gregory. If your daddy like the whole world had been inside
can give fifteen dollars you have
were never interested in finding out that classroom, everyone had heard
no business being on relief."
that you couldn't concentrate because what the teacher had said, everyone
"I got it right now, I got it right
you were so hungry, because you had turned around and felt sorry for
now, my Daddy gave it to me to
hadn't had any breakfast.” turn in today, my daddy said. .." me”
(Gregory) (Gregory)
"And furthermore," she said,
looking right at me, her nostrils
getting big 2 and her lips getting
thin and her eyes opening wide,
"We know you don't have a
daddy."
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