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The kid wants to look good for      He  didn’t  have  money  and  he

     Helene,  he  prefers  to  have  a   didn’t  have  different  clothes  to
     lady's  handkerchief  rather  than   wear  every  day.  But,  he  tries  to

     wipe  his  nose  on  his  hand.  He   have his clothes clean because it is
     thought  that  it  would  be  too   a value that he learned, and it is

     unpleasant  for  the  girl  and  for   important.  People  should  follow
     him.                                this  example  because  it  is  not

                                         necessary  to  have  the  fashion

                                         clothes to look  good, but people
                                         need clean clothes. Also, the boy

                                         wants to impress Helene with his

                                         look.













                             needed love from his father.
            Reason  3        Teachers thought that the child couldn’t do anything well. Moreover, the child


                                                       Supporting Evidence                  Supporting Evidence
                 Supporting Evidence
     “The  teacher  thought  I  was  stupid.   She  turned  around  and  looked   “There was shame there. Now there
                                             mad.  "We  are  collecting  this
     Couldn't spell, couldn't read, couldn't                                     was  shame  everywhere.  It  seemed
                                             money  for  you  and  your  kind,
     do arithmetic. Just stupid. Teachers    Richard  Gregory.  If  your  daddy   like the whole world had been inside
                                             can give fifteen dollars you have
     were never interested in finding out                                        that classroom, everyone had heard
                                             no business being on relief."
     that you couldn't concentrate because                                       what the teacher had said, everyone
                                             "I got it right now, I got it right
     you  were  so  hungry,  because  you                                        had turned around and felt sorry for
                                             now, my Daddy gave it to me to
     hadn't had any breakfast.”              turn in today, my daddy said. .."    me”

     (Gregory)                                                                   (Gregory)
                                             "And  furthermore,"  she  said,
                                             looking  right  at  me,  her  nostrils
                                             getting big 2 and her lips getting
                                             thin  and  her  eyes  opening  wide,
                                             "We  know  you  don't  have  a
                                             daddy."


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