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               For it appears, by all that has transpired,°                     / occurred / that’s taken place
               That indirectly, and directly, too,°                              / That both directly, and indirectly
               Thou hast contrived against the very life
               Of the defendant,° and thou hast incurred                        / this same merchant
                                                   178
               The penalty, by me, formerly stated.°                            / erstwhile described
               Down, therefore, and beg mercy of the Duke.  179


               —Gratziano   180
               Beg that thou mayst have leave to hang thyself!
               And yet, thy wealth being forfeit to the state,
               Thou hast not sums enough to buy the rope.°                      {not left the value of the cord}
               Therefore, thou must be hanged at the state’s charge.   181

               —Duke
               That thou shalt see the difference of our spirit,
               I pardon thee thy life before thou ask it.
               For half thy wealth—it is Antonio’s;               / As for thy wealth, one half goes to Antonio.
               The other half comes° to the general state,                             / goes
               Which humbleness may drive unto° a fine. 182                            / lesson to


               —Portia
                                                       183 184
               Ay, for the state, and for what it is owed,                      {Ay, for the state, not for Antonio}
               +Still half the Jew’s wealth goes unto Antonio.°,                       / the merchant


               —Shylock   185




               176. / For it appears, as all those here have witnessed
               177. {In which predicament I say thou stand’st; | For it appears by manifest proceeding}
                       / And this predicament is one in which
                         Thou stand.  For it appears, by these proceedings°  / by your own actions / all we’ve witnessed
                       / And this predicament, I say, is one | In which thou stand.   As everyone has witnessed
                       / And this, I say, is the predicament | In which thou stand.  For it has so appeared, | By the proceedings,
               witnessed here by all
               178. {The danger formerly by me rehearsed}
                       / The penalty that I have erstwhile stated / The punishment of which I have just stated
               179.  Again, we see that Portia’s actions—aiming to harm Shylock—go beyond the call of what was needed to free
               Antonio.   We can only surmise that her intention changed midstream after she encountered Shylock, a person whose
               demeanor, vengefulness, and complete lack of mercy was alien and offensive to Portia’s human sentiments.   As
               such, she found herself newly motivated—after she had delivered Antonio—to now try and destroy or diminish this
               abhorrent person.
               180. As part of the staging, Gratziano could run over to ‘help’ Shylock get down on his knees.
               181.  For some dialogue which could be included here, see Additional Notes: 4.1.363
               182. / Lest humbleness reduce it to a fine.
               183. / Ay, only the portion° the state is owed    / that for which
               184. Here Portia is revealing her position. Why is Portia making sure that Antonio be given half of Shylock’s
               money?  What is her agenda in assuring this outcome?   Why not have the Duke forgive the whole amount—both the
               state’s and Antonio’s—or simply drive both “unto a fine”?  Why is Portia laboring to get Antonio half of Shylock’s
               money? [See Additional Notes, 4.1.335]   4.1.369 ???
               185.   Original passage—which is replaced herein—reads:
                       Nay, take my life and all!  Pardon not that!
                       You take my house when you do take the prop
                       That doth sustain my house; you take my life
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