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I. People want a new life (S.P)

A. Want to change their life perspectives.
B. Search for a new life.

C. Want to meet new people/places.
II. Others countries offer new opportunities (S.P)

A. More jobs demands.
B. A better level of education.

C. More technology.

Final Draft

Over the years, a lot of people migrate to others countries to
improve their lives in many ways. The two most important reasons
are to have a new life and to find new opportunities.

One reason is that people want a new life. Most of them want to
change their life perspectives. This is because some of them want to

forget about bad experiences in their own countries. For this reason,
people want to achieve new goals. Also, people want to find a better
life. They think that by migration they could improve their lives.
Also, they want to change their bad habits too. In addition, migrants

meet new people and with this new places too. Meeting new people
allow them to lend the bad friends that can affect their lives in
negative ways. Also, by visiting new places, people can realize

different things in their lives.
Another reason for migration is the desire to find new
opportunities. Many people migrate because they find more job
opportunities in other countries. Also, they can access a good job

with a high salary. In particular, education is important too. In other
countries, you can find a better level education. Also, you can find a

variety of careers to choose it. In addition, technology has an
important effect too. For this reason, many people search for a
country with a good technology improvement.

A lot of people migrate for different reasons. Over the years more
people start to do it. As a result, each country gain more in its

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