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Step 4: Outline.

Thesis Statement: Good opinion of tuition free education.

Topic Sentence 1: A lot of advantages for people who want to study

 Poor people have the opportunity to study
 A lot of subjects to select.

Topic Sentence 2: People don’t spend a lot of money.

 Students can save money.
 Students learn more things and study a lot.

Topic Sentence 3: People don’t spend a lot of money.

 Tuition free education have a high level of education.
 Teachers teach well because of the money they earn.

Step 5: Final Draft:

Should university education be tuition free?

Tuition free in college education means free education without cost where people can

select the program they want. Since, education is the most important thing today to acquire

a good job. Due to this, I think that college education tuition free due to many advantages it
has.

The first reason is because there are more opportunities for all people.[ First of all, poor

people can study because this kind of education is for all social classes. Also, students can

have a lot of opportunities. Due to this, these colleges are designed for students can the

subject that they like most without taking care of how it costs.]

The second reason is that students don’t need to spend a lot of money. [Since, this colleges

are free people can save money because they have only a little expenses. In addition, because

of the money people who study in those colleges study very much this is because, anyone

want to spend money for paying any semester.]

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