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（五）日常办公沟通－提出建议

1.Example

收件人：Example@company.com
主 题：Suggestions
Dear Mr. Bell,
You have done a good job in your presentation this morning. Your visuals were very impressive.
However, l would like to make one suggestion.
From my point of view, a few of the jokes you have shown in your presentation were
inappropriate to your audience. Though seemingly funny, off-color humor can quickly alienate
people. l would eliminate that kind of humor when addressing in formal
occasions. And there were enough good jokes left to spice up a presentation that do not risk
offending your audience.
I hope you don'-t mind this friendly suggestion. Wish you every success in your career.
Yours sincerely.
Jim Green

2.常用表述

（1）语气委婉，以免对方误会，得罪对方
（2）提出建议及相关解决问题的方法

（3）希望对方能理解自己的好心建议

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