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            11.4  Using Parallelism

            Parallel structure in a sentence makes ideas balanced and clear. It is used in:

            1. topic sentences and thesis statements         Tablets are preferable to laptop computers
               •  Thesis statements often include three parallel items   because of their cost, ease of use, and portability.
                that will be discussed.

            2. lists of related items                        Juneau, the capital of Alaska, can be reached by
                                                             sea and by air, but not by land.
            3. a series of actions                           The three events in a typical triathlon are
                                                             swimming, cycling, and running.

            4.  paired conjunctions (such as both... and;    The scores of students in Group A were greater
               either... or) or comparisons (especially with   than the scores of students in Group B.
               than and as . . . as)                         In São Paolo, Brazil, November is as hot as
               •   Comparisons must be between similar items.  December.
                                                             Juneau can be reached either by sea or by air.




             ACTIVITY 2


           Circle the letter of the choice that correctly forms a sentence with parallel structure.

             1. Physiologists recommend a physical workout that combines stretching,   , and cardio training.

              a. lift weights        b. lifting weights           c. to lift weights

             2. Some professors give students the choice to work    , in pairs, or in groups.

              a. individual          b. by themselves             c. themselves

             3. This study tracked the dental health of patients who brushed their teeth manually compared to
              electric toothbrushes.

              a. patients who used   b. they used                 c. using

             4. Consumer Reports compared over 30 packaged cereals in terms of nutrition, package size, and   .

              a. cost                b. how much it cost          c. what it cost

             5. For many people, adding and subtracting mentally is faster than    a calculator.
              a. using               b. to use                    c. use







           148  Unit 11  Using Parallel Structure


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