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8. Begin sentence 11 with In contrast and a comma.

9. In sentence 11, change and to but to emphasize contrast.

10. In sentence 12, add both the instructor and between for and the student to emphasize that the
teacher is also affected.

ACTIVITY 12 Original Writing

On a separate sheet of paper, write a comparison paragraph (at least six sentences). Compare two
people, places, or things. Use connectors in your paragraph.

Here are some examples of how to begin.
• College instructors are different from high school teachers in several important ways.
• Learning another language is similar to learning to play a musical instrument.

• Laptops and tablets have several things in common.

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