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8. It is good to add specific examples. In sentence 7, add the phrase such as many
eastern societies after cultures.
9. In sentence 9, change smart to a more specific adjective meaning intelligence
gained from experience.
10. Connect sentences 11 and 12. Add this phrase in the best location: instead of.
Consider changing verb forms and punctuation.
ACTIVITY 11 Original Writing
On a separate sheet of paper, write a comparison paragraph (at least six sentences)
about a topic related to health. Use at least two prepositional phrases and one
preposition combination, and underline them.
Here are some examples of how to begin.
• In spite of what most people think, fast walking is actually better for your body than
running.
• There are many popular diet plans, but there are several reasons why the
Mediterranean plan is most commonly recommended by doctors.
• For a young person, playing soccer is better than playing American football for
several reasons.
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