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4. Change part of speech (change nouns into verbs, verbs into nouns, etc).

Example :
Original : A good student-teacher relationship improves students’ motivation

in learning.
Paraphrased : A good student-teacher relationship facilitates the improvement of

students’ learning motivation.

5. Combine sentences (use connecting words to combine shorter phrases and

sentences or to divide longer sentences into shorter ones).
Example :

Original : Bullying results in some psychological disorders. It should not

be ignored.
Paraphrased : Bullying which results in some psychological disorders should

not be ignored.

6. Move phrases: Move parts of a sentence to change the sentence structure.
Example :

Original : Among high school students, peer interaction and acceptance is

highly significant on their confidence level.
Paraphrased : Peer interaction and acceptance has strong significance on the

confidence level among high school students.

EXAMPLE EFFECTIVE PARAPHRASING
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The followings are the examples of some effective paraphrasing:

Original Passage Effective Paraphrasing
Just as Sherlock Holmes investigates a Bram and Peebles (2014) advocated for

case, psychologists must evaluate all the psychologists to evaluate all the available

available data before making a data before making a deduction, just as
deduction, lest they jump to an erroneous Sherlock Holmes investigates a case,

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