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conclusion on the basis of insufficient lest they jump to an erroneous

evidence (Bram & Peebles, 2014, pp. conclusion on the basis of insufficient
32–33). evidence (pp. 32–33).

A business firm’s obligation, beyond that Business should focus on objectives that

required by the law and economics, is to are not only legal and financially
pursue long-term goals that are good for appropriate, but are of long range benefit

society (Robbins et al, 2003, p.138). to society (Robbins et al, 2003, p.138).
Students frequently overuse direct In doing research papers, students often

quotation in taking notes, and as a result quote too excessively, failing to keep
they overuse quotations in the final quoted material down to a desirable level

(research) paper. Probably only about of about 10% of the paper. Since the

10% of your final manuscript should problem usually originates during note
appear as directly quoted matter. taking, it is good to minimize the amount

Therefore, you should strive to limit the of the recorded word from the source

amount of exact transcribing of source when you are gathering your notes
materials while taking notes (Lester, (Lester, pp.46.47).

1976, p.46-47).

Activity IDENTIFYING EFFECTIVE
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PARAPHRASING

Identify the effective paraphrasing by giving a check to the correct one, then
explain the reasons.

1. Original source: “As the first meal of the day, breakfast has an important role in
supplying energy and nutrients, which are critical to working and learning

activities”.
Paraphrase 1: Breakfast which is served as the first meal in the morning has

an important contribution in providing energy and nutrients which are
important for working and learning activities.

Paraphrase 2: Breakfast contributes to the supply of energy and nutrients

which are important for performing working and learning activities.

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