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… Quiz …
               Below are several excerpts of research paper example. The excerpts are taken
               from different chapters of that example. Decide which ones belong to Methods
               chapter. Mark [√] for what should be included in Methods chapter, and mark [X]
               for those which should not be in it.

                1.  The  participants  were recruited  by  advertisement  in  a  newspaper  and
                     were paid $4.50.

                2.  Current theories focus on personal characteristics to explain wrongdoing
                     and to explain how someone can intentionally harm others.

                3.  Most theories suggest that only very disturbed people are capable of
                     administering pain to an ordinary citizen if they are ordered to do so.

                4.  A "shock generator" was used to trick the participants into thinking that
                     they were giving an electric shock to another person in another room.

                5.  The switches were also labeled with terms which reminded the participant
                     of how dangerous the shocks were.

                6.  It  provides  evidence  that  this  dynamic  is  far  more  important  than
                     previously believed, and that personal ethics are less predictive of such
                     behavior.
                                                                                        Taken from explorable.com

               After identifying the sentences that belong to Methods chapter, can you explain
               why each sentence has two verbs with pas participle?
               … Tip …
                   In Methods chapter, Passive voice is often used.
                   Passive voice rule:
                            Be + past participle*
                   The person or thing that performs the action is not necessary to be
                     mentioned.

                 *Past participle is also known as Verb 3.
                 *Be should transform depending on the number of subject and/or the tenses (whether
                 present or past) .


                                         To highlight the most important participants or events
                                         in  your  research,  you  have  to  place  them  at  the

                                         beginning of your sentence. Therefore, you have to use

                                         passive voice.









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