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What do you think about these two versions of process paragraph? Which one is
better? Why? Circle the process sequences.

VERSION 1 VERSION 2
The skin is dried. Then it is taken to a In the initial stages of the process, the skin
factory. In the factory, it is washed in water is dried before being taken to a
and lime, then soaked in lime and factory where it undergoes two
flattened and submerged in tannin. After treatments. Firstly, it is washed with water
that it is polished and taken to another and lime, followed by a soak in lime and
factory. In the factory, it is turned into then flattened, after which it is submerged
leather goods. in tannin. The last stage involves polishing
the leather with a roller. The pieces
are subsequently transported to a
processing factory where they are made into
a number of items in preparation
for shipping.
Taken from https://www.ieltsetc.com/2018/01/how-to-describe-a-process/

… Practice …
Now, based on the topic that you choose in previous chapter, write down your
research processes or experiment procedures. Make sure to employ passive voice
and process sequences.

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