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Many times, people ask how writing essays will help them in the “real
world.” This real-world assignment demonstrates how writing with

examples might be used outside the classroom.

You are the director of security for a large mall. Many employees

leave after dark, and recently, a female store manager was the victim

of a carjacking as she left alone, late at night. You want to remind all
employees of the mall, both male and female, of basic safety

procedures they can follow to stay safe from carjackings and other

types of crimes. You want to mention and give examples of such

safety measures, which might include using a buddy system, going to

one’s car with a security guard, being observant, having keys ready

and cell phone dialed to security, and other measures you might think
of.

Consider the tone of your message. You do not want employees to be

unduly alarmed, but you wish them to be cautious and to watch out for

themselves and one another.

Peer Revision Checklist for Example

Essay

1. Does the introduction draw the reader in and give

any necessary background?

2. Does the thesis state the general idea that the
body paragraphs will exemplify?