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Practice 15-6 Correcting Run-ons with a

Dependent Word

In each sentence, underline the spot where the run-on occurs. Write

RO in the blank to the left of the sentence if it is a run-on (fused

sentence), CS if it is a comma splice. Correct the following sentences,

using a different dependent word with each.

1. The throbbing in Ryan’s jaw became worse he

picked up the phone to call the dentist.

2. The setting sun painted the lake red-gold, the
breeze ruffled its mirrored surface.

3. A water shortage developed the city imposed a

ban on outdoor watering.

4. The women’s softball team has won every game

this season, the men’s team has turned in its worst

performance ever.

5. Helen won tickets to the concert she is looking for

someone to go with her.

A Special Case: The Word That