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keep my work area neater
3. New view of life
helps me see life as something I control, not something that
controls me
helps me see that hard work turns desire to succeed into
success
new hopes for future
Outline 2
Thesis:
Karate has given me confidence, self-discipline, and a new view
of life.
Topic Sentence 1:
Karate has helped me become mentally and physically confident.
Topic Sentence 2:
The self-discipline I bring to karate has helped me become more
disciplined in other areas.
Topic Sentence 3:
Seeing my hard work pay off has given me a new view of life and
of my future.
