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3) The last important reason is that she was a hardworking woman. My

grandmother worked all her life for her family and every day she dedicated time
to take care of her children.

- Subordinating Conjunctions
- One reason for that my grandmother was my role model is that she was a wise

woman. She taught me moral values through her life when she explained me the

dangers that the world has and the best ways that I need use in that case.

- Another important reason is that she always was a sweetheart with her family
and neighbors because I remember that all the time my grandmother was very

friendly with each member of the family. Also, she was warm and respectful
with the neighbors.

- The last important reason is that she was a hardworking woman. My

grandmother worked all her life for her family and every day although she didn’t
dedicate some time to talk with her children.

- First Draft

My role model that I had during an earlier time in my life was my

grandmother. I can say that for three important reasons. The first important
reason is that she was a wise woman. She taught me moral values through her

life when she explained me about the dangers that happen in the world and the

best solutions in these cases. The second important reason is that she always was
a sweetheart with her family and neighbors. I remember that all the time my

grandmother was very friendly with each member of her family because it was
her values. Also, she was a warm and respectful woman with her neighbors. The

last important reason is that she was a hardworking woman. My grandmother