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worked every day for her family although she didn’t dedicate much time to talk

with her children.

- Closing Sentence

In conclusion my grandmother was my role model for all these important reasons.

She was a wise, sweetheart and hardworking woman. She was a necessary element
in my life.

- Identify the type of closing sentence

I repeat the same vocabulary of the controlling idea.

- Final Draft

My role model that I had during an earlier time in my life was my grandmother. I

can say that for three important reasons. The first important reason is that she was a

wise woman. She taught me moral values through her life when she explained me about
the dangers that happen in the world and the best solutions in these cases. She was my

second mother because she dedicated a lot of time to gives us love. The second
important reason is that she always was a sweetheart with her family and neighbors. I

remember that all the time my grandmother was very friendly with each member of her
family because it was her values. Also, she was a warm and respectful woman with her

neighbors. She taught me that the better value moral is love to God and your family.

The last important reason is that she was a hardworking woman. My grandmother
worked every day for her family although she didn’t dedicate much time to talk with her

children. She always gave all of it for love to her children. In conclusion my
grandmother was my role model for all these important reasons. She was a wise,

sweetheart and hardworking woman. She was a necessary element in my life.