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Link (transition): Another, while, which.

Evidence: Wise and caring politicians should work to preserve the health of our young people
and proposed laws restricting access to these harmful beverages will be an important step in
protecting the next generation.

Explanation: Change in the law and a better government intervention in this problem of energy
drinks.

Link: In fact, for example, after.

Concluding Paragraph
 Restate thesis: Health risks, legal precedent and financial implications are the
issues that represent Energy drinks.

Restate body paragraph 1’s main idea: (Health risks) Energy drinks can produce high blood
pressure and high heart palpitations with cardiac problems.

Restate body paragraph 2’s main idea: Another argument in favour of restricting access to
these beverages is simply financial.

Leave the reader with something insightful about your topic: “A quick buzz is not worth the
cost to their bodies or their wallets”.

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