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Body Paragraph 2
Point (topic sentence): It could be too much government intervention in people personal lives.
Evidence: people is able to spend their money as they wish.
Explanation: they are mature enough
Link (transition): However people under age 18 do not know their rights and responsibilities.
Evidence: although they can get alcohol, tobacco, they can get energy drinks easily
Explanation: It’s a worrying part because they are trying to protect the next generation.
Link: politicians should work to preserve teenager’s health.
Concluding Paragraph
Restate thesis: It is important to approve a law.
Restate body paragraph 1’s main idea: Finding options to get drinking energy drinks.
Restate body paragraph 2’s main idea: Encouraging teenagers care their health.
Leave the reader with something insightful about your topic:
