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Our Participation for

Mongolian Evolution

Mongolia is facing crises. Kidnapping, visual abuse, burglary, and corruption have created

fear, anger, and hunger among the population.

Noe it is time for us to make changes and take actions. Together, we can build a better

future for Mongolia.

Mongolian citizens are beginning to lose their sustainable behavior. Even the kids under ten

are attempting to do things that are inappropriate for their age. This is one of the results of

irresponsibility. Also it can relate to not having access to information, However there is still

hope. We should teach and promote education and communicate openly. So we can build a

better future for Mongolia.

Second, stay under the rule. Rules can make us liable and advanced, depending on what

type of rule it is. For example in traffic, we should never go through paths only for public

buses. It can lead to major traffic jams. To avoid such issues, we must follow these

regulations.

Third, people should at least put their guard high up, in order not to lose their main and

valuable information. We must always prioritize our safety. It depends on us. By keeping

our safety high, deceivers will stay away, leading them to change. This action can change the

future of Mongolia without any hesitation.

At last, people are debating whether the government is the only and biggest reason for our

country's current state, whether it's pathetic or not. The truth is that both the government

and its citizens are responsible for our country's decline. If we keep going in this way

without any improvement, the country named Mongolia will be erased soon from the Earth.

There will be a hopeless situation for Mongolia unless we participate as an genuine citizen

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