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Which, when you part from, lose, or give away,  111
               ‘Twill mark° the ruin of your love, I say,° 112                  / be    // I daresay
                                                     113 114
               And give me reason to regret° the day.                           / good reason to rue
                   She places ring on Bassanio’s finger


               —Bassanio
               Madam, you have bereft me of all words.°  115                           / but stolen all my words
               All that can speak° is the blood in my veins;   116                     / but speaks /  speaks now
               As there is such confusion in my powers°  117                           / speech / words / breath
               Much like° the buzzing cheers that issue from                                   {As}
               The rousèd° masses after they have heard                                        {pleasèd}
                                                           118 119
               Some fine oration by their sovereign° prince,                           / honored / beloved
               Where every sounding, fully blent together,  120
                                                      121 122
               Turns to a wild of nothing save of joy.°                                / nothing but joy
               +And now in me, each voice is lost,° each cry,                                  / one
                                            123
               Expressed yet not expressed.    When this ring parts










               111. {Which when you part from, lose, or give away,}
                     when: implies an inevitability or an outcome which is expected to happen, whereas if does not imply such
               inevitability.
               112. {Let it presage the ruin of your love}
               113. {And be my vantage to exclaim on you.}  / And give me cause to berate you all day.
                    vantage: just cause, give me cause, advantage (as in having a good reason); my chance, my opportunity.
                    exclaim: yell, rail, fume, scream, denounce, etc.   (ex-claim: give up your claim on me.)
               114.   [See Additional Note, 3.2.174]
               115.  / Madam, your words have (but) rendered me speechless / Madam, you have but stolen all my words.
               116. {Only my blood speaks to you in my veins}
                        / And now what speaks is the blood in my veins / Only the blood in my veins doth now speak;
               117. {And there is such confusion in my powers}
                     powers: a) power of speech; ability to speak or articulate; b) power of intellect and will; ability to match what is
               in the mind with the words
                       / As great confusion besieges my words / And great confusion sieges all my words / And great confusion
               hems my power of speech    / As great confusion besieges all my words / As all my powers of speech are confused.
               118. {As after some oration fairly spoke | By a beloved prince there doth appear}
                       / As after hearing some well-spoken words (/fine oration) |  By a beloved prince who doth appear
                       / Like buzzing cheers, come from the rousèd masses | When hearing° words from their beloved prince
                             / Like ecstatic (/rapturous) applause of the masses
                             / Like buzzing cheers among the multitudes°  / arising from the masses / that come from pleasèd crowds
                             / ‘Tis like the buzzing cheers of pleasèd masses,
               119. / The rousèd masses after their beloved | Prince doth appears and give some fine oration.
               120. {Where every something being blent together}
               121. {Turns to a wild of nothing save of joy} / Turns to a wilderness of un’fied°  joy    / mingled
               122.  something: sound, noise, voice, all the cheers
                     nothing: silence.  Where every voice (something) blends together in a barren land (wild) of silence (nothing).
                     wasteland: {wild}; wilderness, desert, barren region, empty plain
               123. {Expressed and not expressed: . . .} This obscure reference generally means that all the cries (of the multitudes)
               are expressed as one cry: thus every cry is expressed (as one voice) and unexpressed or unheard (as a singular voice).
                       [See Additional Notes, 3.2.183]
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