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UNIVERSIDAD TECNICA DE AMBATO

FACULTAD DE CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA
EDUCACION
CARRERA DE PEDAGOGIA DE LOS IDIOMAS
NACIONALES Y EXTRANJEROS

English Writing
Name: Luis Jiménez
Level: Segundo “B”
THE CORRECTION OF THE PARAGRAPH

Write an opinion paragraph about pollution.

Step 1: Problems, solutions

The health of the children of Pelileo, a lot of traffic in the city that must be solved
by the governments of the city. I can be the mayor or also the health ministry of
that city.

Step 2: Topic sentence
Air pollution causes health problems where we live and to society.

Step 3: Outline
Air pollution causes health problems where we live and to society.
I. The city governments search solutions.
A. The children have problems of health.

B. The society doesn´t have a fresh environment.

II. The transport on the street increases more and more.

A. Buses and cars are the main factors that pollute.
B. The manufacture of many cars is bad for the health of people.