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UNIVERSIDAD TECNICA DE AMBATO
FACULTAD DE CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA EDUCACION
CARRERA DE PEDAGOGIA DE LOS IDIOMAS NACIONALES Y
EXTRANJEROS
English Writing
Name: Luis Jiménez
Level: Segundo “B”
THE CORRECTION OF THE PARAGRAPH
Write a contrast paragraph about the outline with respect of different aspect in the Sierra
region and Coast region.
Topic sentence: The different aspects they have in the sierra and on the coast region.
General statement:
I. The food of the sierra with that of the coast region.
A. Traditional food
B. In the sierra they eat more than on the coast
II. The custom of using different clothes.
A. The dress of Salasaka with that of Emeralds
B. The different climate that each region has
Paragraph:
The different aspects they have in the sierra and on the coast region. Frist, the food of the
sierra with the one of the coast, the food in the sierra range does not compare with the
one of the coast, since in the coast they eat fish and in meat Saw. Traditional food, in the
Sierra the best known traditional food is potatoes with guinea pig and on the coast the fish
with patacones. In the sierra they eat more because we are accustomed to eating heavy
metals such as: potatoes, corn and cucumbers, which on the coast eat light meals like
chewing gum. Second, the custom of wearing different clothes, the traditional dress of
Salasaka is more warm for example the poncho, and in Esmeraldas only with a shirt this
depends on the weather that we are. While in the Sierra it is very cold, and on the coast, it
is hot.
Topic sentence: _______________
General statement:
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