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Step3: write the paragraph.

Having a job has many effects and causes.

Having a job has many effects and causes; the first, to have more money
and to be able to buy the things that we can want, also to be able to

travel either for a little time or for a long time we can also travel around
the world, and be able to eat what you want or what you find in a store;
second, to have new work experiences, such as with new friends,
sharing new work teams, and also open more work fields; And finally,
not having free time for activities that are planned with friends or
family, this causes not being able to play football because you feel tired,
nor go walking in the park because you have more hours of work . In
conclusion we can say that having a job has its advantages, and

disadvantages, the advantage in that we can have what we want and
the disadvantage that we cannot have more time to spend a moment
with the family.

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