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UNIVERSIDAD TECNICA DE AMBATO

                                     FACULTAD DE CIENCIAS HUMANAS Y DE LA

                                                       EDUCACION
                                     CARRERA DE PEDAGOGIA DE LOS IDIOMAS
                                     NACIONALES Y EXTRANJEROS
                                                    English Writing
               Name: Luis Jiménez
               Level: Second “B”
                                       THE CORRECTION OF THE PARAGRAPH
               Describe a one paragraph composition about the causes and effect of a job.

               (150-170 words)

               Step1: Make a list of cause and effect.
                                 Cause                                      Effect
                 To have more money                        Meet new people

                 A good life                               To have new experiences
                 To be able to buy what I want             Not have free time


               Step2: Write an outline.
               Having a job has many effects and causes.
                  I.   To have more money
                     buy new things

                     be able to travel the world
                     eat a lot

                 II.   Have new work experiences
                     new friends
                     teamwork
                     know more fields of work


                III.   Not have free time for activities
                     be able to play soccer
                     more work hours
                     go for a walk
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