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8. In sentence 10, change the subject to this to avoid repetition.

9. Sentences 10 and 11 have related ideas. Combine the sentences with and. Then delete
It also shows that the speaker has thought a lot about and too to avoid repetition.

10. Add both to the new combined sentence for emphasis.

ACTIVITY 11 Original Writing

On a separate sheet of paper, write a classification paragraph (at least six sentences) about a topic that
interests you. Explain what it is and give facts, details, and/or examples. Use at least one example of the
passive voice and underline it; try to use two if possible.

Here are some examples of how to begin.
• Most people have several different kinds of friends.
• An interesting presentation needs to include certain elements.
• Most people spend their vacation in one of three ways.

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