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You are going to write a story  (200-250  words) about a
          dream,  ending  with the words, 'l wol<e  up. lt had all been a
          dream.'  The outline  of the story is told in the pictures, but the
          end of the dream is missing.  Worl< in pairs.  Read  the outline
          and discuss what the characters  are like and how the dream
          ends.



           Make your writing more interesting  by using:
           .  a variety of adverbs and adverb phrases.
           .  a variety of adjectives.
                                                                 1 I was reading  in bed. lt was late.  I heard a strange noise
           o  direct speech,  with a variety of reporting verbs and
                                                                   outside.
             adverbs.
          Read the Writing  fip, then write the first paragraph  of your
          story. Use the first picture and the sentences  below  it, and
          these  questions  to help you.
          What kind of bool<was  it? How often do you read in bed?
          Were you feeling sleepy?

          Write the second  paragraph  ofyour story,  using the second
          picture,  the sentences  below  it and these  questions  to hetp
          you.
          What  does the window  overlook?  What was the weather
                                                                 2 I got up and looked out of the window.  I couldn't  see what
          lil<e?  How did you feel?  Did you calI out?
                                                                   was making  the noise.
          Write the third paragraph  of your  story,  again  using the
          sentences  and these  questions  to hetp you.  Use direct  speech
          for the conversation.
          Was your brother already  awal<e? How did he react?
          Had he heard the noise  too? Did he try to reassure  you?
          Who suggested  going outside?
          Write the final paragraph  of your story,  again  using the
          sentences  and the question.  Add the ending  you thought  of in
          exercise 1. Finish  with the words, 'l wol<e  up. lt had a[[ been a
          dream.'

          Count  the words. lf there are fewer than 200,  add some more
                                                                 3 I went to my brother's room.  We discussed what to do
          detail, eventS or direct speech.  lf you have written  more than
          250 words, look for unnecessary repetition,  or cut some
          detaiI  or events.

          Now write a final copy of your story.


           Have you:
             used  adverbs  and adverb phrases?
             used  a variety of reporting verbs  and correct
             punctuation  with direct speech?
             used  a variety of adjectives and put them  in the
             correct  order?
             checked  the spetting and grammar?                  4 We went outside. The door closed behind us.
             written  the correct number of words?                 What happens  next?

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