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Write  a  Persuasive  Essay



                     C  Complete  the  charts  below  with  information  from  the  text  in  exercise  A.  Write  in  your
                         notebook  if  you  need  more  room.  Then  work  with  a  partner  and  compare  your  answers.


                              Traditional  College  Classroom               Online  Learning  or  MOOC
                              Advantages         Disadvantages           Advantages         Disadvantages

                           direct              expensive              diverse
                           contact  with                              student
                           professor                                  body












                     2   BEFORE  YOU  WRITE.

                     A  Work  with  a  partner.  Brainstorm  more  advantages  and  disadvantages  of  both  traditional
                         college  classes  and  online  classes.  List  your  ideas  in  your  notebook.

                      B   Make  a  chart  like  the  ones  in  exercise  1C.  Decide  which  has  more  benefits:  traditional
                         classes  or  online  classes.


                     3   WRITE  to  convince  your  reader  that  either  traditional  college  classes  or  online  classes
                         are  better.  Write  three  or  four  paragraphs.  Use  your  chart  from  exercise  2B  and  the  text  in
                         exercise  1A  to  help  you.


                          WRITING  FOCUS       Using  Semicolons
                          Writers  use  semicolons  when  they  want  to  connect  two  sentences  that  have  closely
                          related  ideas.  They  are  commonly  used  when  the  second  sentence  begins  with  a
                          transition  word.  See  the  examples  below:
                          College  tuition  rates  have  been  increasing  for  many  years;  as  a  result,  many
                          people  are  not  able  to  afford  a  traditional  college  education.
                          It  is  also  true  that  you  don’t  meet  with  your  classmates  face  to  face;  however,  you
                          can  interact  with  them  online.

                          Remember  to  put  a  comma  after  a  transition  word.




                     4   SELF  ASSESS.  Read  your  essay.  Underline  the  transition  words  and  prepositonal  phrases
                         that  indicate  contrast,  cause,  effect  or  result,  or  addition.  Then  use  the  checklist  to  assess
                         your  work.

                          |    J  used  transition  words  indicating  contrast,  result,  and  addition  correctly.  [15.1-15.3]
                          |    I  used  prepositional  phrases  indicating  cause  and  contrast  correctly.  [15.4-15.6]

                          |    I  used  semicolons  correctly.  [WRITING  FOCUS]


                                                                   UNIT  15   CONNECT  THE  GRAMMAR  TO  WRITING   451
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