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ACTIVITY 6     Common Error 8.3

               In each paragraph below, some subjects and verbs are missing from the adverb clauses and independent
               clauses. Fill in the blanks with the missing words or phrases from the box above the paragraph.

                 are         has          most people          the empty space is



                 1.      While the human body                                     several billion atoms,
                   it also contains a vast amount of empty space. In fact, there is so much empty space
                   that once all                                    removed, the remaining atoms
                                                        no bigger than a sugar cube. Another interesting fact about
                   these atoms is that they are present in everything on the planet. However, there are different types of

                   atoms, although                                      are only familiar with a few of them.



                 obtain    rubs      the bees    they cannot obtain    they can produce    the pollen



                 2.      Plants and bees need each other to survive. The bees eat the plant pollen, and the plants
                   need the bees to transfer the pollen from plant to plant. When
                   eat the pollen,                                    coats their bodies and their faces. Then

                   the bees fly to other plants because                                   enough pollen
                   from just one plant. When the bees land on the next flower, the pollen from the other plant
                                                        onto the new plant. Plants need this new pollen so that
                                                        new fruit.




                 is         is not       it         scientists        that is         these problems


               3.       Light pollution is a problem because                                  prevents
                   people from seeing the night skies clearly. Although

                   a problem, it                                    the only problem light pollution causes.
                   Light pollution also causes some health problems. For example, light pollution prevents people
                   from creating enough melatonin. While melatonin
                   necessary for healthy sleep cycles, it may also be important for other things. For example,

                                                        is possible that melatonin helps to strengthen immune
                   systems since                                      have found links between health problems
                   such as obesity, depression, and certain cancers and too much artificial light at night. Although
                                                        might be a result of unhealthy sleep patterns, scientists are

                   studying melatonin’s other effects on the body.


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