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charge  of  handling  the  customers,  have  failed  to  make  effective  and
                      accurate  English  communication.  This  condition  may  lead  to  some
                      potentially harmful effects regarding the company’s credibility as well as the
                      customers’  trusts  to  the  company.  Since  your  company  has  many  foreign
                      clients, such language incompetence would create potential disadvantages.


                      Proposed Solutions
                          We  believe  that  EduLight English  Course  is  the  answer  of  the
                      communication  problem  that  your  company  has.  We  would  like  to  ensure
                      you that hiring new employee who graduated from English majors will not
                      be  the  best  solution.  Why?  Because  that  kind  of  deployment  will  not
                      guarantee that they are able to handle the business that your company is
                      running.
                          Better  solution  that  we  can  offer  to  you  is  an  English  communication
                      training  program  in  which  it  can  adjust  the  needs  of  your  staff.  We  are
                      convinced  that  the  staff  in  John’s  Real  Estate  Company  has  been  highly
                      professional in dealing with the customers. It is only the English language
                      that they need to improve in order to be much better. This training will be
                      much  more  effective  and  efficient  since  it  is  conducted  based  on  very
                      specific purposes. Furthermore, we would appreciate to hear what you think
                      about negotiation  or  request  for learning  materials  that need  to  be  added
                      during the training program. Another best thing or our program is that the
                      training can be administered in your company, letting the progress monitor
                      and supervisory easier to be conducted.


                      Schedule Planning
                         The training program will run for approximately 15 meetings (including
                      mid-term and final term test). The number of meeting(s) per week will be
                      conducted according to the request from your company. Each meeting will
                      last for 90 minutes.
                      Pricing Information
                      Here’s an estimate of our pricing and services for John’s Real Estate for your
                      review:

                    Service                        Price                 Amount           Subtotal
                    Handouts and materials         Rp 3.000.000,-            1 module Rp 3.000.000,-
                    Transportation                 Rp 75.000,-                     15x Rp 1.125.000,-
                    Teachers’ honorarium           Rp 2.000.000,-          2 teachers Rp 4.000.000,-
                    Administrations                Rp 2.000.000,-                     1 Rp 2.000.000,-
                                                                              Subtotal
                                                                          Tax (7.5%)           Rp 759.375,-
                                                                                 Total    Rp 10.884.375,-



                      1. What is the name of the company that proposes the business?

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