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               The first step in setting up a comparison-contrast composition is to

               choose your points of comparison or contrast and decide whether to

               compare or contrast. One way to decide is to prewrite. That way, you

               can see whether your primary focus is on comparison or on contrast.

               Following is a sample brainstorming for a paragraph or essay.



               Brainstorming—Two Teachers


                 Kimball                                 Bettman



                 extremely good teacher                  excellent teacher


                 liked by students                       liked by students



                    funny but disorganized                  organized lectures—hints about lectures, test
                                                         questions



                    multiple-choice tests                   essay tests


                    group project assignment easy to        research paper approachable and friendly
                 talk to





               Though there are several points of comparison, the contrasting points

               “lectures,” “tests,” and “assignments” may make a more interesting
               paragraph than the points of comparison. These points will also be

               more valuable to a reader who is trying to decide which class to take.
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