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7   In  your  notebook,  combine  each  pair  of  sentences  into  one  sentence  with  a  reduced  adverb
                         clause.  Use  the  words  in  parentheses  when  they  are  provided.  Add  commas  where  necessary.


                         1.  She  had  driven  everywhere  for  years.  Ella  wanted  to  move  to  a  more  walkable  neighborhood.
                            Having  driven  everywhere  for  years,  Ella  wanted  to  move  to  a  more  walkable
                            neighborhood.

                            Ella  made  a  decision.  Ella  looked  for  a  website  about  walkability.  (before)

                            Ella  was  doing  some  research  online.  She  found  a  “walkability”  website.  (while)

                            The  website  considers  factors  such  as  walking  distance  to  stores  and  public  transportation.
                            It  gives  a  walkability  score.  (after)


                            Some  communities  had  gotten  bad  walkability  scores.  These  communities  made  changes  to
                            improve  their  scores.

                            They  have  everything  they  need  nearby.  That's  why  Ella’s  family  is  happy  in  their  new  home.

                            Ella’s  children  walk  home  from  school.  Her  children  can  stop  at  a  park  and  play.  (while)

                            Ella  had  been  dependent  on  a  car  for  years.  Ella  is  happy  that  she  doesn’t  need  one  now.



                     8   EDIT.  Read  the  paragraph.  Find  and  correct  six  more  errors  with  reduced  adverb  clauses
                         and  commas.  There  is  more  than  one  way  to  correct  some  errors,


                                                             City  Life

                                        growing
                               After  grew  up  in  the  suburbs,  many  young  people  in  the  United  States  are  choosing
                           to  live  in  cities.  Have  attended  college  in  lively  cities,  a  lot  of  young  people  don’t  want

                           to  give  up  their  urban  lifestyles  after  they  graduate.  Cities  offer  a  variety  of  interesting
                           things  to  do  plus  the  convenience  of  having  everything  nearby.  After  experience  city  life,

                           many  young  people  find  living  in  the  suburbs  boring.  Transportation  is  another  factor
                           that  makes  cities  attractive  to  them.  Having  spent  their  early  years  riding  around  in  the

                           family  car  a  lot  of  young  people  prefer  to  get  around  on  public  transportation,  by  bike,
                           or  on  foot.  These  forms  of  transportation  give  them  more  independence.  Being  more

                           independent,  their  parents  are  proud  of  them.  There  are  other  benefits,  too.  For  example,
                           walking  can  be a  social  activity.  While  friends  are  walking  together,  they  can  have  a

                           conversation  or  stop  and  have  coffee.  Since  there  are  sidewalks,  bike  lanes,  and  public
                           transportation,  there’s  no  need  to  have  a  car  in  many  cities.  Not  own  cars,  young  people

                           don’t  have  to  spend  money  on  parking  and  gas.  Whenever  they  want  to  leave  the  city  they
                           can  rent  a  car  or  take  a  bus  or  train.  Cities  offer  everything  that  many  young  people  want

                           these  days.





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