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Instead of writing ….              Write ….
- We are writing with        - We are writing about

   reference to ...             ….
- We shall be in position    - We shall be able to

   to …                         ….
- In the course of the next  - During the next few

   few weeks…                   weeks ...
                             - Throughout the next
- The information is
   required in connection       few weeks …
   with ...                  - The information is

- We would like to              needed to/for …..
   express our regret at     - We need this
   being unable to fulfil
   your requirements.           information to/for…
                             - We are sorry we

                                cannot meet your
                                requirements.

   g- Avoid jargon:

   Jargon means some special words and phrases, which are
utilised by particular groups of people and are difficult for others
to understand. This means that you should not utilise roundabout
or old-fashioned phrases that add nothing to the message. These

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