Page 10 - Student: dazed And Confused
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No voice much to say
                       No sight see everything see  more
                       Blood and  bodies and tears see them in  my head  people lie still cold  in ground all
                busy and  loud  in  my head this is gift this is curse noise and  smell  life and death violent
                       Hurting now too many too much can't help them what I do I  help I  listen  I try
                       I am first alone  no help for me no friends no family no love just noise dead  not calm
               want justice revenge  rest some sleep I shall sleep forever
                       Was born empty will die dirty dirty with death alone always alone angry peaceful  I  in
                between feel tired so tired
                       Know everything teach others to see help them all
                       I feel  nothing just helpless

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                       Girl  in cave  not in head
                       She speak can't answer her she sent here to help like  me  I  help I  help them all
                       Man come too silence I  not see but hear I feel quiet in  head  no-one there still waiting
                       No noise peaceful  I first he last she middle
                       Calm now soon hurt again  I  know


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                       Man go
                       Girl fall down she dead  now speak to me say day not cold say thank you  means
                nothing everything girl  in good  place
                       Say me crazy just resting
                       Tears screaming over now I  resting we resting





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                                                   W rite r's  n o te b o o k







                How do people cope when they find out they're different from other people?  When  no-one
               will  believe them 'cos it sounds crazy?  Are the alone?

               Three  narrators -  beginning,  middle, end.  Triangle.
               Stages of power.  Stages of life, death, whatever.


                HCW lines, TY,  HM, spin any that fit.
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