Page 10 - Student: dazed And Confused
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No voice much to say
No sight see everything see more
Blood and bodies and tears see them in my head people lie still cold in ground all
busy and loud in my head this is gift this is curse noise and smell life and death violent
Hurting now too many too much can't help them what I do I help I listen I try
I am first alone no help for me no friends no family no love just noise dead not calm
want justice revenge rest some sleep I shall sleep forever
Was born empty will die dirty dirty with death alone always alone angry peaceful I in
between feel tired so tired
Know everything teach others to see help them all
I feel nothing just helpless
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Girl in cave not in head
She speak can't answer her she sent here to help like me I help I help them all
Man come too silence I not see but hear I feel quiet in head no-one there still waiting
No noise peaceful I first he last she middle
Calm now soon hurt again I know
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Man go
Girl fall down she dead now speak to me say day not cold say thank you means
nothing everything girl in good place
Say me crazy just resting
Tears screaming over now I resting we resting
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W rite r's n o te b o o k
How do people cope when they find out they're different from other people? When no-one
will believe them 'cos it sounds crazy? Are the alone?
Three narrators - beginning, middle, end. Triangle.
Stages of power. Stages of life, death, whatever.
HCW lines, TY, HM, spin any that fit.