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Chapter 5 Deliver
Low Fidelity_Video
Findings and Action Points
Summary Feedback Suggestions Incorporate suggestion to show An Post lady giving
Overall Appeal • Highly appreciated for its heart-warming writing materials to characters
story flow.
My Inputs:
• Show that characters are exchanging gratitude
What works • The story of key character and her • cards in Story 2 and 3.
DELIVER What doesn’t • Comprehension issues on the role of An Suggestions to to Connor as John and Mary are associated to
discovery of the touchpoints transformed
Changed the name of male character from John
her from being sad isolated to being
happily connected
religion.
work
post at the end . There’s confusion on
show lady on the
why characters went to An post
side of the panel
