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3. Trustworthiness, honesty, and a sense of humor are qualities I

look for in a friend.

4. I broke off my engagement because I needed to finish college

before marrying, I wanted my freedom, and I was not ready for

a long-term commitment.

5. People on public assistance should work for the money they

receive. Such work would prepare them for the job market, give

them confidence in their abilities, and give them experience that

would help them obtain future employment.

Avoiding Ideas That Are Too

Broad

Ideas that are too broad are too large to develop in a single

paragraph. Often, they are also vague because the writer has not
taken the time to consider exactly what the paragraph will be about.

Example of a Thesis Point That Is Too Broad

thesis
A degree in elementary education will give me a chance to work

at a