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Sample Writing answers
The response is logically organised with well-managed cohesion. There are some
ve叩 good linkers [Gone are the days when I Additionally I What's more] and accurate
refe「ence and substitution.
Vocabula叩 is accurate and wide ranging [satis命... financial needs I take on I risen
exponentially I break even I improving their lo可 with some sophisticated resource
[putting all your eggs 的 one basket I burnt out I spread too 的in]. Similarly, the range
of grammatical structures is wide and flexible.
This is ave「y good example of a higher-level response.
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